Friday, April 30, 2010

we stood there together
the begining
knowing that when one made a decision
the other would follow
of that there was really no question
only the direction
and that made the choosing
less of a sentence

11 comments:

Brian Miller said...

as long as you did it together...

Vencora said...

i love writings that end in ambiguous words like "sentence"

Everyday Goddess said...

a co-created direction is the best way to travel, in my opinion.

Marla said...

I love this.....

Not The Rockefellers said...

but was there resentment?

The Night Writer said...

I really like this poem especially the economy of words, and the imagery that it conjures up as I read.

Tracie said...

Who went first?

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secret agent woman said...

With any luck, the direction is beneficial to both.

Together We Save said...

Love it!!

Georgina said...

This is quite lovely. It speaks to the scary ambiguity of committing to someone or something else. You have to take the good and the bad, but ultimately it is your choice as to whether or not you see the whole experience as a trap. Very "John Donne-ian". - G