it is done
the beginning
has begun
and so we have ended
these juxtapositions
trite
there will be more
words
for now
this will suffice
i'm not well
but there is too late
and it will be
soon
About Me
- justsomethoughts...
- that picture is "the dude" from the movie "the big lebowski". an entertaining movie. no, i'm not really much like him at all. more like walter. but i figured that i can always change the picture, right?
16 comments:
interesting write...wether you read it backward or forward..
but there is too late
Yes.
I so agree with Miller. I enjoyed reading it both frontward and backward. It might describe my newfound relationship. Nice wording. Cheers Just!!
You're back...or are you?
Ooh, reading it backwards is great! If you read it backwards, would it then be early or on time?
OK... now I'm doing the whole backward forward thing and I'm gettin' all dizzy
heh
there
is
two...late
Rene
I wasn't getting the backwards thing either....
This is fascinating - especially the part about "too late" coming soon. I hope that whoever you're warning gets the point - looks like you're not gonna put up with this too much longer - and that's a good thing :)
Beautifully written, profound and poignantly felt. As Brian said, reading backwards is just as wonderful.
Combined with you being away for a while, this beautiful poem also makes me sad. Hope you are doing Ok these days. - G
Soon words more kiss..
Your poetry makes me a little worried for you, worried but hopeful. Whatever you're working out, we're here with you...
Pearl
'm new here... but yeah, man, the piece so so thought-provoking... Really dug it.
It's not Dr. Seuss, but I like it.
too long between posts. you remain a troubled enigma.
you write brilliant poetry,
keep it up.
:)
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