Thursday, August 12, 2010

late

it is done
the beginning
has begun
and so we have ended
these juxtapositions
trite
there will be more
words
for now
this will suffice
i'm not well
but there is too late
and it will be
soon

16 comments:

Brian Miller said...

interesting write...wether you read it backward or forward..

Kate said...

but there is too late

Yes.

bobbybegood1 said...

I so agree with Miller. I enjoyed reading it both frontward and backward. It might describe my newfound relationship. Nice wording. Cheers Just!!

Marla said...

You're back...or are you?

Sprite's Keeper said...

Ooh, reading it backwards is great! If you read it backwards, would it then be early or on time?

Unknown said...

OK... now I'm doing the whole backward forward thing and I'm gettin' all dizzy
heh

there
is
two...late

Rene

JoJo said...

I wasn't getting the backwards thing either....

Phoenix said...

This is fascinating - especially the part about "too late" coming soon. I hope that whoever you're warning gets the point - looks like you're not gonna put up with this too much longer - and that's a good thing :)

Sam Liu said...

Beautifully written, profound and poignantly felt. As Brian said, reading backwards is just as wonderful.

Anonymous said...

Combined with you being away for a while, this beautiful poem also makes me sad. Hope you are doing Ok these days. - G

Anonymous said...

Soon words more kiss..

Pearl said...

Your poetry makes me a little worried for you, worried but hopeful. Whatever you're working out, we're here with you...

Pearl

Unknown said...

'm new here... but yeah, man, the piece so so thought-provoking... Really dug it.

Captain Dumbass said...

It's not Dr. Seuss, but I like it.

creative kerfuffle said...

too long between posts. you remain a troubled enigma.

Hyde Park Poetry Palace said...

you write brilliant poetry,
keep it up.

:)