Thursday, May 6, 2010

blindness

i would say
no you cant
or
no you wont
or
no you wouldnt
or something like that
when you see the blackness
and the need
and the twisted black and silver wreckage
and you'll still say
you would

but you haven't seen

11 comments:

Marla said...

I've seen the wreckage. I still believe and hope. Want to join me yet? Come on! It'll be fun! :-)

Monkey Man said...

Yay, I know what you mean - the black and silver will be a wreck until Al Davis dies.

justsomethoughts... said...

marla - i will have to consider your offer.

monkey man - i actually laughed out loud. but it's not really that funny, is it....

Kate said...

Some people just know how to do it. Even when it looks the worst.

Brian Miller said...

it all changes when its right there in front of you...

吳wyat031tskiles8 said...

how do u do?................................................................

JoJo said...

Why did I think of the Oakland Rayduhs when I read "black & silver wreckage".....

I see I'm not alone, after readying Monkey Man's comment.

Georgina said...

Sight and seeing are two different things. I like that you get that. - G

g. fox said...

thanks for the kindest words of late... much appreciated.

Jingle said...

http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/jingles-may-follower-award-week-3.html

awards,
happy Monday!

Jingle said...

awesome poem,
hope that everything goes well with you,
take good care,
you deserve happiness.