Saturday, May 8, 2010

it began with a single heartbeat
i wish i could say i knew
but sitting there
then
i knew that i didnt
know

13 comments:

Vencora said...

i don't know either

Sam Liu said...

I don't think anyone knows.

Monkey Man said...

Who knew?

Brian Miller said...

but that you know now,
that is good.

Brian Miller said...

no monkey, who did not know...

Not The Rockefellers said...

maybe because it's so close to Mother's Day but I'm feeling this as if it is written from the perpective of a babe in the womb.

lovely

Peace ~ Rene

JoJo said...

Who knows?

Marla said...

Knowing....

Jingle said...

nicely said.
you knew at times,
but could not spit it out!

Jingle said...

love your work!

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/12/thursday-poets-rally-week-18-may-13-19-2010/

Welcome to our Thursday Poets Rally,
to participate,
Simply post a poem,
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Happy Poetry Day!

Leena said...

When do we actually know that we truly know... Do we ever. Your poem stopped me. I like that.

Jingle said...

http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/jingles-may-follower-award-week-2.html

happy Saturday!

One Woman's Thoughts said...

I stopped by as per mention of your blog and award by Vencora.
I love poetry. It digs deep into our emotions, it wraps it's words around us and lets us scream without fear.
I'll be coming back again.