Climbing out
Crawling
Grit
Scraping
Tears
Moist
Adjusting
Twitching
Still
Spent
Standing
Wobbly
Sniffing
Touching
Precipice
Steady
Steady
Steady
No pathos
No quarter
Quite Suddenly
Rising
Filling
Flowing
Out
And over
Forcefully
Past
Tremendous
Eyes
Clouds
Mist covered valley
Stars
Sand
Open
Knowing
Together
Broken
Chords
Broken
Harmonies
Broken wings
Dragging
Tears
Black
Ebbing
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16 comments:
like a river, i got caught in its pull...all the way down...nice trip through the desert in that one part...nicely done. glad you joined in this week.
Somehow, I now want to cuddle a bit and then watch a movie.
Very nice.
Pearl
This has to be one of the best 55s I've ever read. The staccato rhythm adds to the gripping tension, the rich imagery and atmosphere. This is truly marvelous.
i've never seen this style used before in a 55 but i liked it, this is a very impressive work!
i of course had to count all the words . . .
The last word made gave me a lift!
Hey, I loved this!
Good job Justy~
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Free...if only...
Amazing as usual.
I really like this style of writing very nice...
Mine is here
Have a great weekend!
Happy Mother's Day!
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shakira
Great flow.
Nicely done! A very interesting piece with alot in it to think about... LOVE it!
beautiful,
it stands out!
I'm with Pearl...skootch over
Peace ~ Rene
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/09/sunday-special-awards-for-remarkable-memes-and-participants/
meme participation award.
i think these might be my favorite.
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