Friday, May 7, 2010

a friday 55 - my first ever. be gentle.

Climbing out
Crawling
Grit
Scraping
Tears
Moist
Adjusting
Twitching
Still
Spent
Standing
Wobbly
Sniffing
Touching
Precipice
Steady
Steady
Steady
No pathos
No quarter
Quite Suddenly
Rising
Filling
Flowing
Out
And over
Forcefully
Past
Tremendous

Eyes
Clouds
Mist covered valley
Stars
Sand
Open
Knowing
Together
Broken
Chords
Broken
Harmonies
Broken wings
Dragging
Tears
Black
Ebbing
Free

16 comments:

Brian Miller said...

like a river, i got caught in its pull...all the way down...nice trip through the desert in that one part...nicely done. glad you joined in this week.

Pearl said...

Somehow, I now want to cuddle a bit and then watch a movie.

Very nice.

Pearl

Sam Liu said...

This has to be one of the best 55s I've ever read. The staccato rhythm adds to the gripping tension, the rich imagery and atmosphere. This is truly marvelous.

sheri... said...

i've never seen this style used before in a 55 but i liked it, this is a very impressive work!

Vencora said...

i of course had to count all the words . . .

Everyday Goddess said...

The last word made gave me a lift!

Sweet Cheeks said...

Hey, I loved this!
Good job Justy~
=]

Irish Gumbo said...

Free...if only...

Marla said...

Amazing as usual.

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

I really like this style of writing very nice...
Mine is here
Have a great weekend!
Happy Mother's Day!
hugs
shakira

Monkey Man said...

Great flow.

Felicitas said...

Nicely done! A very interesting piece with alot in it to think about... LOVE it!

Jingle said...

beautiful,
it stands out!

Not The Rockefellers said...

I'm with Pearl...skootch over

Peace ~ Rene

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/09/sunday-special-awards-for-remarkable-memes-and-participants/

meme participation award.

creative kerfuffle said...

i think these might be my favorite.