Wednesday, December 23, 2009

i can post this

noone will know...


the light
so bright
so painful
only when
staring
everything
gets hazy
and white
only then
i see
you
though not clearly
again
and i'm never sure
if it's me
or if it's you

13 comments:

Monkey Man said...

Mesmerizing. The light.

Irish Gumbo said...

So pretty...easy to lose oneself in the light.

I like it.

Brian Miller said...

i tend to lose myself in the light...and i dont mind it one bit...smiles.

justsomethoughts... said...

monkey man - thanks

irish - it is.

mr miller - lost is a big word.

Diane said...

No one?

Shadow said...

sometimes a bit of a shadow is needed. brilliantly written though, i've read and 3, 4 times and it just flows so well. and thanks for your visit!

The Dental Maven said...

I guess it might not be surprising that I shy away from the light.

happy holidays JST!

justsomethoughts... said...

diane - not a soul

shadow - thank you very much.

maven - perhaps. do you find garlic troublesome as well? :)

Marla said...

So, I see I have a new follower which means, of course, I must investigate. Lo and behold, it leads me to your blog which, of course, I must read to find out who this person following me is. What I find, much like an unexpected Christmas present, is very deep and thoughtful writings. Lucky me!

justsomethoughts... said...

marla - thank you. that's very kind of you.

Oh My Goddess said...

I'm never sure if I see myself clearly at all.

rdl said...

nice poem!

justsomethoughts... said...

goddess - i dont know that we ever do.

rdl - thank you.