Wednesday, December 23, 2009

i can post this

noone will know...

the light
so bright
so painful
only when
gets hazy
and white
only then
i see
though not clearly
and i'm never sure
if it's me
or if it's you


Monkey Man said...

Mesmerizing. The light.

Irish Gumbo said...

So pretty...easy to lose oneself in the light.

I like it.

Brian Miller said...

i tend to lose myself in the light...and i dont mind it one bit...smiles.

justsomethoughts... said...

monkey man - thanks

irish - it is.

mr miller - lost is a big word.

Diane said...

No one?

Shadow said...

sometimes a bit of a shadow is needed. brilliantly written though, i've read and 3, 4 times and it just flows so well. and thanks for your visit!

The Dental Maven said...

I guess it might not be surprising that I shy away from the light.

happy holidays JST!

justsomethoughts... said...

diane - not a soul

shadow - thank you very much.

maven - perhaps. do you find garlic troublesome as well? :)

Marla said...

So, I see I have a new follower which means, of course, I must investigate. Lo and behold, it leads me to your blog which, of course, I must read to find out who this person following me is. What I find, much like an unexpected Christmas present, is very deep and thoughtful writings. Lucky me!

justsomethoughts... said...

marla - thank you. that's very kind of you.

Oh My Goddess said...

I'm never sure if I see myself clearly at all.

rdl said...

nice poem!

justsomethoughts... said...

goddess - i dont know that we ever do.

rdl - thank you.