noone will know...
the light
so bright
so painful
only when
staring
everything
gets hazy
and white
only then
i see
you
though not clearly
again
and i'm never sure
if it's me
or if it's you
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- justsomethoughts...
- that picture is "the dude" from the movie "the big lebowski". an entertaining movie. no, i'm not really much like him at all. more like walter. but i figured that i can always change the picture, right?
13 comments:
Mesmerizing. The light.
So pretty...easy to lose oneself in the light.
I like it.
i tend to lose myself in the light...and i dont mind it one bit...smiles.
monkey man - thanks
irish - it is.
mr miller - lost is a big word.
No one?
sometimes a bit of a shadow is needed. brilliantly written though, i've read and 3, 4 times and it just flows so well. and thanks for your visit!
I guess it might not be surprising that I shy away from the light.
happy holidays JST!
diane - not a soul
shadow - thank you very much.
maven - perhaps. do you find garlic troublesome as well? :)
So, I see I have a new follower which means, of course, I must investigate. Lo and behold, it leads me to your blog which, of course, I must read to find out who this person following me is. What I find, much like an unexpected Christmas present, is very deep and thoughtful writings. Lucky me!
marla - thank you. that's very kind of you.
I'm never sure if I see myself clearly at all.
nice poem!
goddess - i dont know that we ever do.
rdl - thank you.
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