Thursday, December 31, 2009

what i have become

less than what i once was
in many respects
and also more
and for every time
by myself
that i was connected
by others
i have been cut loose
and this sin
as viewed by another
a crime i committed
with no malice
will be my warrant
but i never meant it to be so
there is more than words
if only you understood

4 comments:

Monkey Man said...

We are never less than what we were. We are simply the sum of our experience.

Brian Miller said...

maybe in a few things, yet i hope i am more in others. the last couple lines are haunting and i am not sure i know why...

Vodka Mom said...

wow. that was a bit sad.



well done.

justsomethoughts... said...

mokey man - you're right. sometimes the subtraction makes the bigger noise though.

mr miller - thank you. at least i got them out right.

vodka mom - well, thats sometimes how it is. and thank you.