title...caught stealing...or chance glance...or somewhere between...ah, title or no, i like your writing...
I love the title of this...sort of like an interruption in the middle of a daydream, played out like a movie scene...sounds like a song in the makingPeace ~ Rene
mr miller - thank you. i like "somewhere in between".rich girl - i'm better with the words than i am with the notes. monkey man - layered. love it.
If I was stealing a glance, that's not what I'd be thinking. I'd be thinking, "Damn, that boy is cute!" Just sayin'.But the writing's still really good! :)
...i dont think ones level of happiness can be compared with anothers - since ppl consider and base happiness on diff things - i feel like theres almost no way to compare. but - i love ur writing :)
For some reason, the visual of Eeyore popped into my head. He was always saying he was happy but he never looked it.Great piece.
Reminds me of a patient once who said, "Who can measure another's pain." That's stuck with me for 20 years.
diane - thank you. and you are kind. lol - thank you. and there's a comment!beth - eyore rules! and thank you. secret agent woman - very poignant. thank you for sharing.
This is one of my favourites.
Wow ... yes.
mon capitan - thank you. marla - thank you. from whence they come. and i am grateful.
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