a few times
i stole a glance
at you
stealing a glance
at me
and it looked
as if maybe
you thought
i was happier than you
and i would love
to have the opportunity
to tell you
that it isn't so.
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- justsomethoughts...
- that picture is "the dude" from the movie "the big lebowski". an entertaining movie. no, i'm not really much like him at all. more like walter. but i figured that i can always change the picture, right?
12 comments:
title...caught stealing...or chance glance...or somewhere between...
ah, title or no, i like your writing...
I love the title of this...sort of like an interruption in the middle of a daydream, played out like a movie scene...
sounds like a song in the making
Peace ~ Rene
Lookers' back.
mr miller - thank you.
i like "somewhere in between".
rich girl - i'm better with the words than i am with the notes.
monkey man - layered. love it.
If I was stealing a glance, that's not what I'd be thinking.
I'd be thinking, "Damn, that boy is cute!"
Just sayin'.
But the writing's still really good! :)
...i dont think ones level of happiness can be compared with anothers - since ppl consider and base happiness on diff things -
i feel like theres almost no way to compare.
but - i love ur writing :)
For some reason, the visual of Eeyore popped into my head. He was always saying he was happy but he never looked it.
Great piece.
Reminds me of a patient once who said, "Who can measure another's pain." That's stuck with me for 20 years.
diane - thank you. and you are kind.
lol - thank you. and there's a comment!
beth - eyore rules! and thank you.
secret agent woman - very poignant. thank you for sharing.
This is one of my favourites.
Wow ... yes.
mon capitan - thank you.
marla - thank you.
from whence they come. and i am grateful.
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