Sunday, December 20, 2009

just some writing

slight
and not here
always there
anywhere
but here
begininning
almost at the end
trying to take a place
that could never be taken
not with clothing
not with song

10 comments:

Brian Miller said...

whoa...so if i read the last two lines correct...naked and no singing...hmm...

creative kerfuffle said...

there are lots of other things to do besides sing when you are naked.

Ann's Rants said...

Your blog and writing style are refreshing. I can take a lesson from fewer words!

Thanks for your awesome comment on my blog. Made my night!

Irish Gumbo said...

Yes.

Fragrant Liar said...

Kind of how I feel about my own writing sometimes. Naked, exposed, not always where I belong.

Captain Dumbass said...

I'm with Irish.

justsomethoughts... said...

mr miller - it's a sad day indeed. well for the no singing part anyway...

creative one - i challenge you to name 2!

ann - don't take lessons. just keep writing. and i'll keep reading.

irish - i thank you.

captain - i shall be content to thank you as well.

justsomethoughts... said...

fragrant one - sorry i missed you there. thank you for your kind words. an ego-protector indeed :)

creative kerfuffle said...

just--name just two??? ok--shower and skinny dip. so there : )

justsomethoughts... said...

creatve one - good. tame, but good.