running now
broken indeed
read
past tense
a warning
never heeded
tomorrow has stolen my light
so it's no surprise
borrowed
out of breath
i would believe
if i could
not falling
climbing down
hand over hand
About Me
- justsomethoughts...
- that picture is "the dude" from the movie "the big lebowski". an entertaining movie. no, i'm not really much like him at all. more like walter. but i figured that i can always change the picture, right?
9 comments:
Maybe it's time to start climbing up?
"holding steady, gaining on last place"...
Maybe this is your black hole/white hole moment...pass through the singularity and emerge anew in another universe.
try reading your poem backward...its pretty cool.
do as Brian says!
Peace ~ Rene
now i can't decide if i like it better read from the top or bottom. delightful ^_^
Amazing! It's wonderful top to bottom and bottom to top. You, my friend, can write.
not falling
climbing down
I like that!
Hey that is pretty cool read backward!
secret agent - perhaps.
irish - at a loss for words. i'll come back to you.
mr miller - i hadn't thought of that. but now everyone seems to like your invention.
richer - i did i did.
vencora - nor can i. says something....
marla - you are too kind.
jake - thank you. i appreciate that.
greenfingers - from you, high praise indeed.
jo jo - i tried it a number of times. mr miller ought to be applauded for this fine idea.
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