you never write
you never visit
you never call
there is nothing
so empty
as a mirror
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- justsomethoughts...
- that picture is "the dude" from the movie "the big lebowski". an entertaining movie. no, i'm not really much like him at all. more like walter. but i figured that i can always change the picture, right?
20 comments:
Sounds like something my mother has said to me recently.
hmmmm, this is sad.
much love
Sad but true, but still we wish and hope. ♡
Rather an empty mirror than a reflection you hate
A double haiku about abandonment and loneliness...the mirror imagery is exquisite pain, my friend. powerful stuff.
wow.
simple
yet so complex.
I hate the idea of a mirror being empty - your own reflection is worth a lot.
Wow, what a powerful message in such a short poem...
Unless it's your soul.
monique - is that bad thing or a good thig ?
staceyj - it is. thank you.
dianne - thats what we do.
monkey man - in full agreement am i.
irish - thank you, sir.
mr miller - always an honour.
secret agent woman - one doesnt always like what one sees.
jojo - thank you.
kate - now you have me thinking.
Lovely and sad. I like a good conceit every now and then. In seeing you not see yourself, I saw myself too. - G
Very deep.
Nicely done.
Big love.
Maddy.
http://maddymad-hatter.blogspot.com/
One word:
Brilliant.
I never look back because behind my toilet is a room-wide mirror, and really, who wants to watch themselves take a dump.
I do like this indeed....
Georgina – thank you. That was really a deep comment
Mad hatter – thank you. I’ll say I knew you before you were famous. You cant stop me.
ib – thank you.
grant – my aunt has a bathroom with mirrors all around. theres a bazillion of you. If a person were doing recreational drugs, they would either find it fantastic, or the scariest shite they ever saw.
Together we save – thank you!
Greenfingers – high praise indeed.
you had me until "mirror". that's tough . . . as in my head, mirrors contain whole other worlds. think lewis carroll.
lana - they do. thank you.
I know this one. I live it sometimes.
So visit.
You'll like him. I've seen his heart. It's a good one.
Those last three lines are pure gold.
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