Monday, January 18, 2010

thus far

singing a song
about grace
and being found
and all the while
looking more lost
than i
thought possible
on this earth
and later
i thought
that maybe
he wasnt

10 comments:

Not The Rockefellers said...

this is me
more than you could ever know

Beth said...

I love your contradictions.

Marla said...

We have much in common.
We aren't.
He is.

...and that's all I'm saying because I don't want to be a guilt-complex-foister.

...or do I? :-)

J Cosmo Newbery said...

It sort of curls into itself...

Brian Miller said...

round and round we go
near then far
like the flow of this one.

The Dental Maven said...

He's not. Definitely not.


Another good one, JST.

lulu's missives said...

That was a lovely post.

Captain Dumbass said...

Nice stuff, as usual.

Lame comment, I know, but it's nice. As it usually is.

justsomethoughts... said...

not the richest - a high compliment.

beth - thank you.

marla - i dont know. do you?

j cosmo - yep. thank you for noticing.

mr miller - thank you. thank you as well.

dental maven - you're right. as usual. and thank you.

lulu - thank you

captain - thank you

kys said...

This is one of your best. I wish I had some of the poems I wrote years ago. I would send them to you. They have a similar vibe.(Or maybe time has inflated my opinion of my abilities?)